This unrequested critique is for Black Redneck vs Space Zombies by Steven Roy.
I'll skip the hooey. With a title like that, this book could be written by a random number generator. Just the title makes me want to read it. Take my fucking money I don't want to wait.
Here's some advice.
Scene 1: We meet Black Redneck. He shoots zombies. Go.
Don't even pretend quality or character development or setting the scene. No. I want goddamn back rednecks shooting space zombies and I can't get to that part fast enough.
Oh, and I read the text as if it were a Dragnet episode. That was fun.